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PostSubject: Love in Eden   Mon Aug 06, 2007 6:46 pm





Yesterday was a sweet sublime dream
Our skins touched with soft lonely lace breeze
The lovers walked by the trickling stream
To a lake of bulrushes and trees
A mossy bedm branches shaded sun
Ripe full berries and hips gently sway
A sudden bird cry the day is done
But a flutter soon resumes loves play
Heavens face smiles sweetly down on me
A pink wild rose sooths the thrashing soul
To an age of timeless ecstasy
Blissful happiness natures true goal
Oh, if this hour ws eternity
The rustling of the leaves ends the bliss
We arise from the tranquility
To walk this field of good service
And gaze at this lands vernal beauty
Swift havering of blue dragonflies
Like some tapestry of sapphires so bright
Warm memories are like sweet blue skies
Her eyes danced like the stars in the night



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PostSubject: Re: Love in Eden   Mon Aug 06, 2007 6:51 pm

your words are very fluttering...so passionate, you can feel the desire of your love to a woman...Great work!


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PostSubject: Re: Love in Eden   Tue Aug 07, 2007 6:36 am

the poe LOVE IN EDEN


Yesterday was a sweet sublime dream,
Our skins touched with soft honey laced breeze
The lovers walked by the trickling stream
To a lake of bulrushes and trees
A mossy bed, branches shaded sun
Ripe full berries and hips gently sway.
A sudden bird cry the day is done
But a flutter soon resumes loves play.
Heavens face smiles sweetly down on me
A pink wild rose sooths the thrashing soul
To an age of timeless ecstasy
Blissful happiness natures true goal
Oh, if this hour was eternity.
The rustling of the leaves ends the bliss
We arise from the tranquillity
To walk this field of good service
And gaze at this lands vernal beauty
Swift hovering of blue dragonflies
Like some tapestry of sapphires so bright.
Warm memories are like sweet blue skies
Her eyes danced like the stars at night.






m is incorrect copy it should read
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PostSubject: Re: Love in Eden   Tue Aug 07, 2007 6:38 am

please can you remove the avator so i can sen a photo abelard3
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PostSubject: Re: Love in Eden   Tue Aug 07, 2007 2:54 pm

yes abelard i already remove the photo in your avatar...

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