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PostSubject: Lonely Bench   Thu Aug 02, 2007 4:51 pm






I pass by and see a one lonely bench
It looked so old and dusty than it was used to be
Full of rusty leaves and memories
It elegance fade as the day takes it away

I can feel the heat of one summer day
When we used to laugh and gaze at each others face
Here in this lonely bench we pledge
We curve our names as a promise our love will stay

Soon our love grown like a book in a fairy tale
Chasing each other while the wind blows my hair
Birds serenading our one happy afternoon
Falling leaves dance and sway to one summer day

As look back only empty bench is there
Forgotten memories that once we use to share
People pass by to a lonely bench we used to sit and play
The only witness to our love that never stay

As I walk away I bring the tears of yesterday
Not as lonely goodbye but the joy and memories of our yesterday
I may not pass by again this way
But the memories will keep as my hair will turn gray


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PostSubject: Re: Lonely Bench   Thu Aug 02, 2007 5:00 pm

Sometimes we forgot to look back to the past that give joy to us...then suddenly we reminisce the special moment that happen to our lives...

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PostSubject: Re: Lonely Bench   Mon Aug 06, 2007 7:39 pm

the lone bench echoes my feelings. very good i like it. abelard3
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PostSubject: Re: Lonely Bench   Mon Aug 06, 2007 7:41 pm

PLEASE TAKE THE PICTURE off my profile
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PostSubject: Re: Lonely Bench   Tue Aug 07, 2007 2:05 pm

thank you abelard3 for the nice comments...
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PostSubject: Re: Lonely Bench   Thu Aug 16, 2007 3:50 pm

Very vivid, I love the imagery and the picture it pains, and every deep feelings expressed.
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PostSubject: Re: Lonely Bench   Tue Jan 11, 2011 2:37 am

It's a beautiful poem, how much could a bench say if it had a mouth. Have a nice week! Jesus.
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