HEARTACHE OF JUDAS

Subject: HEARTACHE OF JUDAS Mon Aug 06, 2007 4:06 pm

Sunset bleeds the days end
Love-less dusty roads cry
BABYLON Cold shivers awaken the eve
This empty Godless little planet
Dancing mirages reality Nothing but a hollow beauty
Ashes of honey, scented words
As we pant after useless efforts
Loyalty and feeling gutted
Promises dead, echoes of infernal hell
Any God will do In this eternal babble.
Emotion drowned by wantons laughter
Spirits flash to and fro.
Empty dreams, limbo and purgatory Hypocrisy destroys loving feelings
Clambering words after words
Life after life, citadels of boredom...
Better the desert than a cold marble palace of treasure.
Night stars alive with hopes and no false prophets.
An occasional glimpse of nirvana and the woman of the night

by: Abelard3

Subject: Re: HEARTACHE OF JUDAS Mon Aug 06, 2007 4:23 pm

The imagery of words is very well crafted... You described well the feeling of your heartache.

Great Poem!!!

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Subject: Re: HEARTACHE OF JUDAS Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:42 am

imagery made me laugh abelard3